Jamie: Oh, my argumentative counterpart. I really enjoyed reading your project. It was concise and clear, except for grouping with the different parts. I thinking it was a technological error, but it didn’t really confusing. I mean, it was clear – part I, II, III, IV. There was no confusion on what your argument is and what your position. Your sources were cited correctly. I would suggest to use a couple quotes here and there if it’s possible. I think it’ll give it a little oomph. But other than that, good job!
Morganne: Your organization and flow of your argument was on point. It was apparent and there wasn’t any ambiguity as to your argument. You’re GIFs and images made a difference in the overall presentation of the project. It seems like you’re almost at the finish line aside from proofreading and expanding on a few ideas. All in all, it was really good!